Sunday, December 7, 2014

The Girl Who Writes

Part two of my saga is not really a part 2.  I just needed an excuse to post a story.  Why, you ask?  Wait, do I know you yet, and/or do you know me?  At the moment I don't have a designated story blog (did I ever have a designated story blog?), seeing as I write them so infrequently as to make it not worth the work of maintaining yet another website thingy.  And so on occasion I post stories and poems here because they take up time that I would otherwise spend knitting.  Or doing legitimate work.  Because independently wealthy is a trait for other people.

In any case, if you do know me, this story is strictly fictional except for the setting.  Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, etc. etc. you get the drift.  And I will proofread this hashtag before posting this time:

#thegirlwhowrites

Wine Country

It had been too long since she felt a warmth like this. The beginnings of sunburn prickling on her bare shoulders. The first stars igniting over their heads as the Miata jostled its way over the weatherbeaten roads back into town. She ought to feel guilty, spending the day in wine country with a man who wasn't her husband. Instead, for a span of a few stolen hours, she felt free.

Not that he was her type, really. She knew full well what that was: tall, thin, gray-eyed and intellectual. Come to think of it, her husband wasn't her type either. And he hated wine: complained about the sourness and the booziness and couldn't tell a Chardonnay from a Riesling. Jim, on the other hand, was going through one of his phases and threw himself into the excursion with a natural ardor. Her bastard brother. Not by blood, of course, but the sort of fickle, just on the edge between screw-up and success life-lover you shook your head and couldn't help smiling at. The last thing she wanted from him was sex. But as a travel companion, he was ideal.

Neither one could quite remember whose idea it was. Although, “I didn't know there was wine country out here,” she admitted, looking out onto another gray winter day over the slovenly Mississippi. However it was, finally there came that weekend that dawned without a cloud and with that first capricious inkling promise of warmth, and Rob had to work, and next thing they knew they were following country highways into Hermann or Hannibal with the top down. She vaguely wished for a hairband. And a pair of shades. The latter more so as they passed the first party trolley and were promptly mooned.

It was the drive as much as anything, they agreed. God's country. Vast stretches of low-lying farmland you could see a lightning bolt clear on the other side of, and punctuated by short knobbly trees you could just imagine cowering and buckling from the heat of the full summer sun. Desolate as any English moor for all the flatness and promised fruitfulness. Here and there they passed a farmhouse with the paint peeling off in chunks, or a silent group of cows. It was like having Whistler in her brain to provide commentary. That was while sober.

“It was the best of times. It was the worst of times,” she quipped as they found themselves in another crowded parking lot with loud music wafting sourly overhead from rented speakers. This time the “estate” grounds were littered with Viking hats. “I won't ask,” she said. “Better not to,” he agreed, turning the key in the ignition.

Then, just as they began to despair, there it sat on the rise of the next hill: quaint, unassuming, unsullied, with nary a trolley in sight. Like a revelation, she thought, and wondered if he thought it too.

And of course, inside, the wine beckoned. Hot and cold on the tongue, lingering on the palate, teasing her memory with not-quite-placeable aromas. He developed a yen for Vignoles. She grew misty-eyed over a tawny port and referenced mead-halls over an oak-matured ice wine. Once the spell was cast, she knew, it would be difficult to undo. She realized she didn't care.

A clatter at the door made them look up from their individual reveries. A shaggy golden retriever, still soaking from a run-in with a hose, dashed in one entrance, through the storefront, and back out the opposite door, followed by a trio of young men in various states of wet formalwear. She watched them and thought vaguely of Whitman's twenty-ninth bather, the young men still handsome with the flush of good health and spirits and someone else's wedding. The proprietor turned up a patrician nose, mortally offended at the intrusion. As for Jim, he laughed and went back to his wine.

They settled on the lawn for a few moments afterward, stretched out in the shade of a venerable oak just getting its leaves back. Her head swam with port and poetry. Not for the first time, she wished she could fly, or at least drift through the cosmos on the perfection of the moment, lie weightless with nothing but the unblemished blue of sky as a mattress and listen to the whispering of the cooling breeze through new leaves.

She knew his thoughts held a different color, that he was aware of the curves of her body through the thin shirt, the heave of her breasts with every half-contented, half-melancholy sigh. But she wasn't her body anymore, more Emerson's transparent eyeball, and the risk to her physical form didn't concern her. Besides, she sort of relished the danger of not knowing whether he had the control today not to do as he wished. He did: she always did bring out a protective impulse as well as the unexpected desire. It was why she trusted him.

The landing was always the hardest part, the slight jerk and thud of re-inhabiting her body, the realization of oak roots digging into her back muscles and the slight dryness to her mouth as the wine dissipated. He waited quietly for her return. “Ready?” he asked when she finally looked up. She nodded, pushing aside the sense of responsibility a little while longer. First she would savor the evening drive.

Alternate scenarios floated through her mind at intervals. What if the car went over a rickety guardrail on a lonely river and her last thought would be of the starry night? Nuit étoilée, her mind filled in automatically, wryly. Or what if she found herself actually attracted to Jim, proposed they run away together and escape the boredom ingrained into her soul by a cold winter and a bland marriage? Would he do it? Sometimes, she thought, watching him drive, his thoughts as occasionally visible as hers, it would be so much easier.

The house was dark as they pulled up. Or course, he'd gone to his sister's, realizing she wasn't home to help ponder the old dilemma of what should they do for dinner. She shrugged, settling the dullness back onto her shoulders like a ratty security blanket. Jim watched her do it, as he had on countless occasions before, and didn't comment. It sat among their many secrets, like wine country. One day, perhaps, it would become a tradition.

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